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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Mr. William I am writing this letter in order to apologize you, regarding the continous noises that keep bothering you. I have considered all the facts about the scenario and hope that you will consider this positively. The foremost reason is birthday party. Lat sunday, it was my birthday party and my friends organized a party to gave me surprise. Besides this, I was not aware from their plan they made together and came to know when I arrived home after my work. As far as concern with your convience, I ashamed and apologize for the nuisance we created and I give you surety that it will never happen again. Also, for the next time if we arrange any part or get together we make sure we will control our leve of noise and finish it on time. I hope you will accept my apoloize. regards navpreet
Dear Mr. William

I am writing this letter in order to apologize you, regarding the
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continous
noises that
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keep
bothering you. I have considered all the facts about the scenario and hope that you will consider this
positively
.

The foremost reason is birthday party. Lat
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sunday
, it was my birthday party and my friends organized a party to gave me surprise.
Besides
this, I was not aware from their plan they made together and came to know when I arrived home after my work.

As far as concern with your
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convience
,
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I ashamed
and apologize for the nuisance we
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created and
I give you surety that it will never happen again.

Also
, for the
next
time if we arrange any part or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure we will control our
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leve
of noise and finish it on time.

I hope you will accept my
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apoloize
.

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regards


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navpreet

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
147 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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