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You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter explain why you took the job describe the problems that you experienced suggest what could be done about them

Dear Chloe Mae Ramos, I am writing this letter with a feeling of ecstatic because of the place I visited yesterday. Mount Mayon is one of the known volcanos in the world because of it's perfect cone shape. It is also included in the seven wonders of the world. Besides the volcano you can also see native locals. They do offer one of the best chicken curries in the town. Surely this should be listed in your bucket list. The volcano is located in Bicol Region which is in the southern part of Island of Luzon. From Manila to Bicol you will need to take a bus and the travel time will be roughly around six hours. Once you have reached Bicol you could either take a taxi or rent a private in order to go to Mount Mayon. No need to worry about crooked driver, they are all regulated by the government. They will will also be your tour guide during your trip. The cost of renting a vehicle is 500 pesos. I planned to visit Mount Mayon this coming March and I remembered it is your birth month as well. My planned is if your schedule on May is free, I could take your their as my birthday gift to you. Don't worry this will be an all expense paid trip as a token on how you supported me on our last project. From bus ticket to accommodation and meals will be shouldered by me. Best Regards. Francis Dacera
Dear Chloe Mae Ramos,

I am writing this letter with a feeling of ecstatic
because
of the place I visited yesterday. Mount
Mayon
is one of the known volcanos in the world
because
of it's perfect cone shape. It is
also
included in the seven wonders of the world.
Besides
the volcano you can
also
see
native locals. They do offer one of the best chicken curries in the town.
Surely
this should
be listed
in your bucket list.

The volcano
is located
in
Bicol
Region which is in the southern part of Island of Luzon. From Manila to
Bicol
you will need to take a bus and the travel time will be roughly around six hours. Once you have reached
Bicol
you could either take a taxi or rent a private in order to go to Mount
Mayon
. No need to worry about crooked driver, they are all regulated by the
government
. They
will will
also
be your tour guide during your trip. The cost of renting a vehicle is 500 pesos.

I planned to visit Mount
Mayon
this coming March and I remembered it is your birth month
as well
. My planned is if your schedule on May is free, I could take
your
their as my birthday gift to you. Don't worry this will be an all expense paid trip as a token on how you supported me on our last project. From bus ticket to accommodation and meals will
be shouldered
by me.

Best Regards.

Francis
Dacera
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IELTS letter You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter explain why you took the job describe the problems that you experienced suggest what could be done about them

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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