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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Dear Darby, This letter is to mention about the issue that I have been facing owing to your continuous use of loudspeakers in the building. Recently, I have observed that your family have late night parties daily and due to this we are not able to get sound sleep. I ought to study for my exams. Which is getting disturbed as the noise does not stop till mid of the nights. Therefore, I request to take this seriously and play music softly as theee are elders in my family who cannot sleep properly. I have told about this incidence earlier one week ago but no action has been taken yet. I request you to please think of my family also and others in the society. Listen to the music exclusively when necessary and in low tone. I would immensely appreciate if urgent resolve of this concern is taken into consideration. Yours faithfully, Rose

Dear Darby, This letter is to Did you mean simply “mention the”? You do not need the word “about” here.mention the
mention about the
 issue that I have been facing owing to your continuous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of loudspeakers in the building.

Recently, I have observed that your family have late night parties daily and due to this we are not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 sound sleep. I ought to study for my exams. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 is getting disturbed as the noise does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 till mid of the nights. Therefore
, I request to take this seriously
 and play music softly
 as Possible spelling mistake found.therethesethreetheethemethees
theee
 are elders in my family who cannot sleep properly
.

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 about this incidence earlier one week Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).ago,
ago
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 no action has been taken
yet
. I request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of my family also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
 in the society. Listen to the music exclusively when necessary and in low tone. I would immensely
 appreciate if urgent resolve of this concern is taken
 into consideration.

Yours faithfully
, Rose