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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Dear Darby, This letter is to mention about the issue that I have been facing owing to your continuous use of loudspeakers in the building. Recently, I have observed that your family have late night parties daily and due to this we are not able to get sound sleep. I ought to study for my exams. Which is getting disturbed as the noise does not stop till mid of the nights. Therefore, I request to take this seriously and play music softly as theee are elders in my family who cannot sleep properly. I have told about this incidence earlier one week ago but no action has been taken yet. I request you to please think of my family also and others in the society. Listen to the music exclusively when necessary and in low tone. I would immensely appreciate if urgent resolve of this concern is taken into consideration. Yours faithfully, Rose
Dear Darby, This letter is to
Did you mean simply “mention the”? You do not need the word “about” here.
mention about the
issue that I have been facing owing to your continuous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of loudspeakers in the building.

Recently, I have observed that your family have late night parties daily and due to this we are not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
sound sleep. I ought to study for my exams.
“Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
is getting disturbed as the noise does not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
till mid of the nights.
Therefore
, I request to take this
seriously
and play music
softly
as
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theee
are elders in my family who cannot sleep
properly
.

I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
about this incidence earlier one week
Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
ago
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
no action has
been taken
yet
. I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of my family
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
in the society. Listen to the music exclusively when necessary and in low tone. I would
immensely
appreciate if urgent resolve of this concern
is taken
into consideration.

Yours
faithfully
, Rose

IELTS letter You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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