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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Dear Darby, This letter is to mention about the issue that I have been facing owing to your continuous use of loudspeakers in the building. Recently, I have observed that your family have late night parties daily and due to this we are not able to get sound sleep. I ought to study for my exams. Which is getting disturbed as the noise does not stop till mid of the nights. Therefore, I request to take this seriously and play music softly as theee are elders in my family who cannot sleep properly. I have told about this incidence earlier one week ago but no action has been taken yet. I request you to please think of my family also and others in the society. Listen to the music exclusively when necessary and in low tone. I would immensely appreciate if urgent resolve of this concern is taken into consideration. Yours faithfully, Rose
Dear Darby, This letter is to
mention about the
issue that I have been facing owing to your continuous
use
of loudspeakers in the building.

Recently, I have observed that your family have late night parties daily and due to this we are not able to
get
sound sleep. I ought to study for my exams.
Which
is getting disturbed as the noise does not
stop
till mid of the nights.
Therefore
, I request to take this
seriously
and play music
softly
as
theee
are elders in my family who cannot sleep
properly
.

I have
told
about this incidence earlier one week
ago
but
no action has
been taken
yet
. I request you to
please
think
of my family
also
and others
in the society. Listen to the music exclusively when necessary and in low tone. I would
immensely
appreciate if urgent resolve of this concern
is taken
into consideration.

Yours
faithfully
, Rose
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IELTS letter You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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