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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Neighbours, Thanks for writing to me about the noise from my flat. I understand that the noise must have caused disturbance to you. I would like to explain the reason for the noise. Some of you might know that I have been doing some repair work in my flat. I have hired some workers to help me fix the water heater which stopped working a few weeks back. The workers initially told that it was just one day work. But, unfortunately it is taking more than two days to fix the water heater due to drilling and insufficient man power. I did inform about this repair work to our flat secretary and got prior permission before staring this work. I wanted to let you know that the repair work has been successfully completed today and so there will not be any noise from my flat. Kindly accept my apology and thanks for being patient. Regards, Sabithaa
Dear
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,

Thanks for writing to me about the
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noise
from my flat. I understand that the
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noise
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must
have caused disturbance to you. I would like to
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explain
the reason for the
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noise
.
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of you might know that I have been doing
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some
repair
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work
in my flat.

I have hired
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some
workers to
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help
me
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fix
the water heater which
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stopped
working a few weeks back. The workers
initially
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told
that it was
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just
one day
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work
.
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But
, unfortunately it is taking more than two days to
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fix
the water heater due to drilling and insufficient
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man
power. I did inform about this repair
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work
to our flat secretary and
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got
prior permission
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before
staring this work.

I wanted to
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let
you know that the repair
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work
has been
successfully
completed
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today
and
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so
there will not be any
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noise
from my flat. Kindly accept my apology and thanks for being patient.

Regards,

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Sabithaa

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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156 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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