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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 3n8X
Dear neighbours, I am Asha. I have seen your letter, it's a complaint regarding the disturbance you are facing. First of all I apologize for the disturbance you are facing. I am having trouble with my home theatre that is placed in my hall. It is producing a continuous high sound. When the volume is reduced, the disturbance is still the same. I have also tried to off the device and check it, but the sound is still as it was. I have raised a complaint to the product's customer service. I spoke to him and explained the issue I am facing and the person had filed a complaint against me and working on the issue and he also said, it would be taking 2-3 business days to get the issue resolved. As the software, to be installed in the device is not currently available. so I have placed the device in a closed container as the disturbance would be reduced to some extent. Finally, I apologize again for the inconvenience you are facing. Yours Faithfully, Asha
Dear
neighbours
,

I am Asha. I have
seen
your letter, it's a complaint regarding the
disturbance
you are facing.

First of all
I apologize for the
disturbance
you are facing. I am having trouble with my home
theatre
that
is placed
in my hall. It is producing a continuous high sound. When the volume is
reduced
, the
disturbance
is
still
the same. I have
also
tried to off the device and
check
it,
but
the sound is
still
as it was.

I have raised a complaint to the product's customer service.
I
spoke to him and
explained
the issue I am facing and the person had filed a complaint against me and working on the
issue and
he
also
said, it would be taking 2-3 business days to
get
the issue resolved. As the software, to
be installed
in the device is not
currently
available.

so
I have placed the device in a closed container as the
disturbance
would be
reduced
to
some
extent.

Finally
, I apologize again for the inconvenience you are facing.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Asha
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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