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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution. Write at least 150 words.

You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution. 6n83

Dear Mr Chan, I am the John Doe, the person who you just employed last week. Originally, I will be start working for you tomorrow, which is November 15. Unfortunately, there is another issue block me out. I am writing to explain the reason and show my apologize. When the time I received the job offer, the starting date is suitable for me. However, just an hour ago, my doctor has a urgent call to me that my grandfather is having some problems with his body and hopes that I can talk with him face to face. Therefore, I have to sorry to tell you that I cannot reach the office tomorrow. Nevertheless, I am going to show up on the next day, which is November 16. If it is not making huge trouble to you, I hope you can accept my suggestion. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Doe

Dear Mr Chan,

I am the John Doe, the person who you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 employed last week. Originally
, I will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working for you tomorrow, which is November 15. Unfortunately, there is another issue block me out. I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the reason and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 my apologize.

When the time I received the job offer, the starting date is suitable for me. However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 an hour ago, my doctor has Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 urgent call to me that my grandfather is having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems with his body and hopes that I can talk with him face to face. Therefore
, I have Did you mean "too sorry to"?too sorry to
to sorry to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that I cannot reach the office tomorrow. Nevertheless
, I am going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 up on the next
 day, which is November 16.

If it is not making huge trouble to you, I hope you can accept my suggestion. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
,

John Doe