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You recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work .Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference . In your letter, say: What is the conference about. How you know about the conference Explain to him/her why it is important that you attend this conference

You recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference. In your letter, say: What is the conference about. How you know about the conference Explain to him/her why it is important that you attend this conference An73
Dear Mr. Savio, I am Manjeet Mankani team leader at your restaurant based in bandra mumbai. Writing this letter seeking your permission to attend a helpful business conference which would take place in Delhi JW Marriot hotel from 25th to 27th April. How to run your restaurant smoothly and how to overcome demanding situation at work The conference is being hosted by Ipoc, One of renowned business organization based out in Uk. I saw their advertisement on social media and local news paper. We would be also expecting some of the successful industry experts who are basing in this business form more than a decade such as Mr. Gordan ramasy and Mr Vikas khanna who not only own chain of hotel all over united states but also in india and middle east. The conference would cover different aspects how to run restaurant smoothly and how to tackle demanding situation arises at work. Looking at my prevailing position in this restaurant I believe that this conference would definitely enhance my skeptics towards work which would be not only benefit myself but also applying my skills to work would help increase hotels reputation as well. Hence, I would herby request you to kindly authorize me to attend this convention and oblige thereby. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Your sincerely,
Dear Mr.
Savio
,

I am
Manjeet
Mankani
team leader at your
restaurant
based in
bandra
mumbai
. Writing this letter seeking your permission to attend a helpful business
conference
which would take place in Delhi
JW
Marriot
hotel from 25th to 27th April. How to run your
restaurant
smoothly
and how to overcome demanding situation at work

The
conference
is
being hosted
by
Ipoc
, One of renowned business organization based out in
Uk
. I
saw
their advertisement on social media and local
news paper
. We would be
also
expecting
some of the
successful industry experts who are basing in this business form more than a decade such as Mr.
Gordan
ramasy
and Mr Vikas
khanna
who not
only
own
chain of hotel all over
united states
but
also
in
india
and
middle east
.

The
conference
would cover
different
aspects how to run
restaurant
smoothly
and how to tackle demanding situation arises at work. Looking at my prevailing position in this
restaurant
I believe that this
conference
would definitely enhance my skeptics towards work which would be not
only
benefit myself
but
also
applying my
skills
to work would
help
increase hotels reputation
as well
.

Hence
, I
would herby
request you to kindly authorize me to attend this convention and oblige thereby.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
!

Your
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference. In your letter, say: What is the conference about. How you know about the conference Explain to him/her why it is important that you attend this conference

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