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Write a letter to your neighbours.In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take. 3neN
Dear pal, I am writing regarding the letter which I received today where you all have complained about the constant noise from our house flat. First of all, I would like to sincerely apologise for such incident and the trouble which it had caused to you all. Also, after thoroughly going through your letter I would like to draw your attention towards the reason for such mishappening. It was weekend our friends and us were huddling after a long time due to the hectic schedule and also we hadn't celebrated for this flat where we moved to last month. So, after gossiping for a few hours we started celebrating afterwards it had became noisy. I am once again extremely sorry for that and will further make sure that such incident will never happen again in future, as we have decided to hang out at some party club from now on, so it will not be a concern for you all. Best regards, paul
Dear pal,

I am writing regarding the letter which I received
today
where you all have complained about the constant noise from our
house
flat.
First of all
, I would like to
sincerely
apologise
for such incident and the trouble which it had caused to you all.
Also
, after
thoroughly
going through your letter I would like to draw your attention towards the reason for such
mishappening
. It was
weekend
our friends and us were huddling after a long time due to the hectic schedule and
also
we hadn't celebrated for this flat where we
moved
to last month.
So
, after gossiping for a few hours we
started
celebrating afterwards it had
became
noisy. I am once again
extremely
sorry for that and will
further
make
sure that such incident will never happen again
in future
, as we have decided to hang out at
some
party club from
now
on,
so
it will not be a concern for you all.

Best regards,
paul
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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