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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 0dM1
Dear Neighbour, I am writing this letter to apologise you because of noise from my house which is very irritating for you. The reasons of the noise at my home is, I am working in night shift and it's work from home mostly. I joined a lot of global meetings in night time though these meetings are really important and all are related to my work. Noise is creating because I don't have any headphones and I have to take all meeting through speakers although I have hearing issue little bit. I really apologise for this matter. I don't want to hurt or irritate any of my neighbour. I will take action against this issue although I will buy good headphone so I can take these meetings properly and nobody will irritate from this. I hope you really understand and accept my apologies. your neighbour jawaria ashraf
Dear
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Neighbour
,

I am writing this letter to
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apologise
you
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because
of noise from my
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house
which is
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very
irritating for you.

The reasons of the noise at my home is, I am working in night shift and it's work from home
mostly
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
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a lot of
global
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meetings
in
This word is normally spelled as one.
night time
though these
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meetings
are
really
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important
and all
are related
to my work. Noise is creating
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I don't have any headphones and I
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have to
take all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
through speakers although I have hearing issue
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
.

I
really
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apologise
for this matter. I don't want to hurt or irritate any of my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.
neighbour
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will take action against this issue although I will
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buy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
headphone
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so
I can take these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meetings
properly
and nobody will irritate from this.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you
really
understand and accept my apologies.

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your
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neighbour


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jawaria
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ashraf

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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