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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation 2M6k
Dear Sir, I feel the need to bring your attention to the issue discovered in your magazine. I am the premium subscriber of your Magazine “The Times”. The regular column published last week had posted the misleading information about my town, Delhi. It portrays that state government is not performing any initiatives regarding the improvement of infrastructure after getting victorious in election. The information does not withstand with the reality owing to the fact that local authorities has waved off the electricity bills for minorities. Moreover, they lifted the taxes upto a certain limit, which is a historical recognized by ruling party. The false facts can create a terrified situation in the city and lead to emergency. Moreover, people can get annoyed by the wrong figures which can demolish the brand equity of your company. There are two ways of correcting this mess. First, issue an apology letter by the editor coupled up with editing the right counts. Second, conduct a press conference and post the fresh facts in your column.
Dear Sir,

I feel the need to bring your attention to the issue discovered in your magazine. I am the premium subscriber of your Magazine “The Times”. The regular column published last week had posted the misleading information about my town, Delhi. It portrays that state
government
is not performing any initiatives regarding the improvement of infrastructure after getting victorious in election.

The information does not withstand with the reality owing to the fact that local authorities has waved off the electricity bills for minorities.
Moreover
, they lifted the taxes
upto
a certain limit, which is a historical recognized by ruling party.

The false facts can create a terrified situation in the city and lead to emergency.
Moreover
,
people
can
get
annoyed by the
wrong
figures which can demolish the brand equity of your
company
.

There are two ways of correcting this mess.
First
, issue an apology letter by the editor coupled up with editing the right counts. Second, conduct a press conference and post the fresh facts in your column.
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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