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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In you letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In you letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her. 6Wmj
Dear John, Hope this letter finds you in good health and prosperity. I'm writing this letter to tell you that you should get a job and not go for higher studies. I think, in this pandemic situation it’s not a good idea to go to college. Nowadays, many of the students are learning through online classes, only few are attending the college if necessary. It’s not the same college atmosphere which we had experienced in the past. Friends aren’t available for group discussions; cafeteria is also not open to chit-chat. So, I believe you won’t be able to enjoy the college life. I'm familiar with your family situations, they need your financial support. So, try to get into a job that is suitable for your career growth. Many professionals are doing work from home, so it ‘ll be convenient for you to look after your elderly parents. As you’ve completed your graduation, as a fresher you can get a job in IT sector because you can find many companies around you and can crack job interviews easily. However, you’re interested in marketing, try to attend interviews in sales department as well, so that you can earn more, and in-turn get valuable experience. Hope this is helpful and all the best for your future. Your friend, Manasa
Dear John,

Hope this letter finds you in
good
health and prosperity. I'm writing this letter to
tell
you that you should
get
a
job
and not go for higher studies.

I
think
, in this pandemic situation it’s not a
good
idea
to go to college. Nowadays,
many
of the students are learning through online classes,
only
few are attending the college if necessary. It’s not the same college atmosphere which we had experienced in the past. Friends aren’t available for group discussions; cafeteria is
also
not open to chit-chat.
So
, I believe you won’t be able to enjoy the college life.

I'm familiar with your family situations, they need your financial support.
So
, try to
get
into a
job
that is
suitable for your career growth.
Many
professionals are doing work from home,
so
it ‘ll be convenient for you to look after your elderly parents.

As you’ve completed your graduation, as a fresher you can
get
a
job
in IT sector
because
you can find
many
companies
around you and can crack
job
interviews
easily
.
However
, you’re interested in marketing, try to attend interviews in sales department
as well
,
so
that you can earn more, and in-turn
get
valuable experience.

Hope this is helpful and all the best for your future.

Your friend,

Manasa
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In you letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
215 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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