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you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In you letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her. 5RkD
Music is one of the most prominent way of connecting people together. Humans feel relaxed and stress free when listening to music. Now-a-days, concerts are taking part on every corner of the world. There is no upper or lower age limit to enjoy music. Music plays a key role in connecting mutiple cultures together. The adavantage we see is, there is no language or culture for music. Music lovers can go anywhere and enjoy to local music, by this way they can easily be habituated to local cultures and respect them. Younger generation may like pop music although elder generation may be fond of some traditional music. Irrespective of there ages music is the single point which connects different ages together. For example, one famous singer Malika who composed song in there local launguage to support aunstarlian football team during FIFA matches. But, this song was a big hit around the world, people from other countires might not be aware of the lyrics but still they loved the music compisition. By this way people from other regions also started engouraging Australian team for winning. To major part of the extent I'm agreeing to the point that Music is one of the best way to bring people together from different cultures and backgrounds irrespective of there ages.
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is one of the most prominent way of connecting
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together. Humans feel relaxed and
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stress
free when listening to
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music
.
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-a-days, concerts are taking part on every corner of the world. There is no upper or lower
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age
limit to enjoy music.

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together. The
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is, there is no language or
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for
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lovers can go anywhere and enjoy to local
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music
, by this way they can
easily
be habituated
to local
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cultures
and respect them. Younger generation may like pop
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music
although elder generation may be fond of
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some
traditional
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music
. Irrespective of there
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ages
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music
is the single point which connects
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different
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ages
together.
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singer Malika who composed song in
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local
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to support
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football team during FIFA matches.
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might not be aware of the lyrics
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engouraging
Australian team for winning.

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is one of the best way to bring
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together from
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and backgrounds irrespective of
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IELTS letter you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In you letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
216 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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