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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved qA1E

Dear Madam, I have decided to write this letter to suggest you a few personal ideas to improve our college cafeteria. I have been going there since the time I started college, so I am a regular customer and I have always liked it. I appreciate the hard work of all chefs for offering delicious and healthy food. The management is in fact, doing an excellent job. Nevertheless, I would like to point out a few things which need improvement. First of all, since this is a student cafeteria, prices need to stay low. Our canteen charges 20 dollars for lunch and this is considerably higher. A few other college canteens in our city charges less than that. Also, these days the quality and selection of food got worse. For example, we do not get enough fruits or vegetables during lunch. I would like to suggest you to add some new seasonal dishes to the menu. I hope you will take my suggestion positively. Thanks for your attention. Yours faithfully, Kate Jones

Dear Madam,

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ideas
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our college cafeteria.

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started
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so
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I
 appreciate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work of all chefs for offering delicious and healthy food. The management is in fact, doing an excellent job.

Nevertheless
, I would like to point out a few things which need improvement. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, since this is a student cafeteria, prices need to stay low. Our canteen charges 20 dollars for lunch and this is considerably
 higher. A few other college canteens in our city charges less than that.

Also
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got
 worse. For example
, we do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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enough
 fruits or vegetables during lunch.

I would like to suggest you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
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some
 new seasonal dishes to the menu.

I hope you will take my suggestion positively
. Thanks for your attention.

Yours faithfully
,

Kate Jones