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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 01y1
Dear Jack, I am writing this letter in reference with the complaint that I received from you yesterday. The complaint is about the noises that is being affecting your afternoon sleep and in the evening its being affecting your children studies. Firstly, I would like to convey my apologies to you for the disturbances that you have been hearing from our house lately. We are in the process of a renovation, we understand that the tools, when being used are causing huge noise. The construction work will continue till friday or maybe saturday afternoon. The interior remodelling will get over on friday of the next week. I would ensure that, to keep the noise low during the afternoons. I would also inform workers to shift the mechanical equipments to the backside and continue their work. I am sorry that i am not able to eliminate the noise but will try to keep it as low as possible. Yours thanking, Sam
Dear Jack,

I am writing this letter in reference with the complaint that I received from you yesterday. The complaint is about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noises
that is
being affecting your afternoon sleep and in the evening its being affecting your children studies.

Firstly
, I would like to convey my apologies to you for the disturbances that you have been hearing from our
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house
lately. We are in the process of a renovation, we understand that the tools, when being
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used
are causing huge
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noise
. The construction work will continue till
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friday
or maybe
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saturday
afternoon. The interior
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remodelling
will
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get
over on
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friday
of the
next
week.

I would ensure that, to
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keep
the
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noise
low during the afternoons. I would
also
inform workers to shift the mechanical equipments to the backside and continue their work.
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I
am sorry that
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i
am not able to eliminate the
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noise
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but
will try to
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keep
it as low as possible.

Yours thanking,

Sam

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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