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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 5Ewm
Dear M'am, I was recently in conversation with one of my colleagues when I get to know that there is a seminar related to back-end development, especially Back-End technologies and distributed microservices in Australia. I am a huge fan of the speaker who is presenting the seminar for not only his oratorship skills but also his expertise in the domain. It simply mesmerizes me. It's like a dream come true for me to attend such a lecture and gain technical insights. Who'd want to leave this one-time opportunity? Although I know that the talk is somewhere next month, I am not sure of the exact date and venue for the program. Also, It would be immensely helpful for me if you'd tell me the details related to the accommodation and the overall expenditure for this including entry fee, refreshment details, etc. Is there any discount available for the corporates? Because it is not in my country, I need to make the arrangements well before time, so it'd be great if you can respond ASAP. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely. ABC
Dear M'am,

I was recently in conversation with one of my colleagues when I
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development,
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technologies and distributed microservices in Australia.

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oratorship
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but
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his expertise in the domain. It
simply
mesmerizes me. It's like a dream
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true for me to attend such a lecture and gain technical insights. Who'd want to
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leave
this one-time opportunity?

Although I know that the talk is somewhere
next
month, I am not sure of the exact date and venue for the program.
Also
, It would be
immensely
helpful for me if you'd
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tell
me the
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details
related to the accommodation and the
overall
expenditure for this including entry fee, refreshment
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details
, etc. Is there any discount available for the
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make
the arrangements well
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before
time,
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it'd be great if you can respond ASAP.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
.

ABC
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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6.0
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