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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. e6LW
Dear Sir/M'am, I hope this letter meets you well. I am writing in respect of the advertised seminar taking place in your country. It caught my attention while I was surfing the internet and looking for programs and seminars relating to my current job. I took immediate interest and I will like to register my interest formally. To this effect, permit me to give a brief introuction of myself. I am a banker and I currently work with one of the largest banks in the world. We are present in about 90 countries across the globe with thousands of operational branches. I currently work with the Digital Channels and Data Analytics team. I have been on this role for about 2 years now. This has informed my interest in your program with the aim of personally developing the needed skills to progress in my career. Consequently, I will like to request that you kindly furnish me with further details to aide my registration and application process. I will like to know firstly, the exact date(s) of the program and also if there will be accomodation provided for the period. It will also be helpful to know the estimated cost for registration and other related costs. Lastly, it will be of great benefit to know the speakers and moderators that will be in attendance. Kindly feel free to reach me via this medium for further information. I look forward to hearing from you and being a part of the seminar. Be assured of my warmest regards. Sincerely, Lamidi Tobi
Dear Sir/M'am,

I hope this letter meets you well. I am writing in respect of the advertised seminar taking place in your country. It caught my attention while I was surfing the internet and looking for programs and seminars relating to my
current
job. I took immediate interest and I
will
like to register my interest
formally
.

To this effect, permit me to give a brief
introuction
of myself. I am a banker and I
currently
work with one of the largest banks in the world. We are present in about 90 countries across the globe with thousands of operational branches. I
currently
work with the Digital Channels and Data Analytics team. I have been on this role for about 2 years
now
. This has informed my interest in your program with the aim of
personally
developing the needed
skills
to progress in my career.

Consequently
, I
will
like to request that you kindly furnish me with
further
details
to aide
my registration and application process. I
will
like to know
firstly
, the exact date(s) of the program and
also
if there will be
accomodation
provided for the period. It will
also
be helpful to know the estimated cost for registration and other related costs.
Lastly
, it will be of great benefit to know the speakers and moderators that will be in attendance.

Kindly feel free to reach me via this medium for
further
information. I look forward to hearing from you and being a part of the seminar.
Be assured
of my warmest regards.

Sincerely
,

Lamidi
Tobi
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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