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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. lPnQ
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing this letter to enquire about the Oral Health Seminar that will be held later this year. I am a dentist working in South Africa with a keen interest in public oral health as well as public policy. Several of my colleagues have attended this seminar before and have only had positive feedback regarding it. I would like to attend the above-mentioned seminar in the Netherlands. Kindly inform me of the exact dates of the seminar as well as what the program will entail. I will also require a list of accommodation options that I can choose from and the cost of attending and participating in the seminar. I look forward to attending this world-class seminar which will enable me to expand my skills as a professional and network with others in the field. I hope to get a favourable response from you soon. Yours faithfully, Dr Dania Chughtai
Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing this letter to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about the Oral Health
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Seminar
that will
be held
later this year. I am a dentist working in South Africa with a keen interest in public oral health
as well
as public policy. Several of my colleagues have attended this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
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before
and have
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only
had
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positive
feedback regarding it.

I would like to attend the above-mentioned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
in the Netherlands. Kindly inform me of the exact dates of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
as well
as what the program will entail. I will
also
require a list of accommodation options that I can choose from and the cost of attending and participating in the seminar.

I look forward to attending this world-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
which will enable me to expand my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
as a professional and network with others in the field.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
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favourable
response from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dr Dania
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Chughtai

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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