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Your neighbour have recently returned to you complain about the noise from your house

Your neighbour have recently returned to you complain about the noise from your house g5wbD
Dear bond my sister children’s came to my house on their summer vacation you know children’s have very lazy nature they play games with noise storage and dance on loud music many times when I try to stop or then they start crying very loudly I apologise for this in future I hope you won’t have any problem about the noise from my house I shifted my sisters and children’s to our another house for dancing and we will go to the ground for playing kindly regards Robin Sanwat
Dear bond my sister children’s came to my
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house
on their summer vacation you know children’s have
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very
lazy nature they play games with noise storage and dance on loud music
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many
times when I try to
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stop or
then they
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start
crying
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very
loudly
I
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apologise
for this in future I hope you won’t have any problem about the noise from my
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house
I shifted my sisters and children’s to our another
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house
for
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dancing and
we will go to the ground for playing

kindly regards Robin
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Sanwat
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IELTS letter Your neighbour have recently returned to you complain about the noise from your house

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  American English
2 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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