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A descriptive composition to complaint the Highview English course.

A descriptive composition to complaint the Highview English course. WyXxa

Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing to notify you of my dissatisfaction with one course of your school. I enrolled in this photography course last week. Unfortunately, there is a gap between what you claim to offer and the actual quality of the class. First of all, the class was oversized, and there were 16 people in fact. In addition, the teaching method is another problem. It is important for green hands to practice more while the teacher required us to learn basic theoretical knowledge by the route. Therefore, I would like to propose my expectation for your course. The class size should be guaranteed, as suggested by the pamphlet. And perhaps the teacher could put greater emphasis on practicing photography rather than learning it by heart. I'm looking forward to developments in the course. Yours faithfully, Mary

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am writing to notify you of my dissatisfaction with one course of your school.

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important
 for green hands to practice more while the teacher required us to learn basic theoretical knowledge by the route.

Therefore
, I would like to propose my expectation for your course. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 size should be guaranteed
, as suggested by the pamphlet. And perhaps the teacher could put greater emphasis on practicing photography rather
 than learning it by heart.

I'm looking forward to developments in the course.

Yours faithfully
,

Mary