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You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, --> express concern (i.e. say you are sorry to hear what has happened) --> tell them about a similar experience that you once had --> give some advice or offer help

You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, --> express concern (i. e. say you are sorry to hear what has happened) --> tell them about a similar experience that you once had --> give some advice or offer help QLX5K
Dear Anna, I am writing this letter to express my gratitude towards your current situation. While I am sorry to hear about the thunder storm that has hit your town and you have faced the worsen weather conditions. It has badly damaged your house, which I must say is a frightening situation. I can understand your situation at the moment, as we once had similar circumstances where our house caught fire by lightning and burnt almost all of our house until some neighbors called a fire brigade. Our losses and repairs were covered by Insurance company whereas it took a month to complete the house restoration. You must think positively and take this opportunity to improve your house damages. If you wish, I can visit to your house in my upcoming holiday and we shall paint the house together or do some simple repairs and chores. I am excited to extend my help. I am looking forward to meeting you. Best wishes, Mahak
Dear Anna,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude towards your
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current
situation. While I am sorry to hear about the thunder storm that has hit your town and you have faced
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the worsen
weather conditions. It has
badly
damaged your
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house
, which I
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must
say is a frightening situation.

I can understand your situation at the moment, as we once had similar circumstances where our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
caught fire by lightning and burnt almost all of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
until
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some
neighbors called a fire brigade. Our losses and repairs
were covered
by Insurance
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company
whereas it took a month to complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
restoration.

You
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must
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think
positively
and take this opportunity to
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improve
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
damages. If you wish, I can visit to your
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house
in my upcoming
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
holiday and
we shall paint the
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house
together or do
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some
simple repairs and chores. I
am excited
to extend my
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help
.

I am looking forward to meeting you.

Best wishes,

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Mahak
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IELTS letter You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, --> express concern (i. e. say you are sorry to hear what has happened) --> tell them about a similar experience that you once had --> give some advice or offer help

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  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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