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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat . Write a letter to your neighbors.

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. galA
Dear Tim, I am writing in connection with your recent noise complaint. I apologize for the inconvenience it might have caused but we didn’t intend to trouble anyone. Let me explain the situation in a little more detail. My son graduated last week and he asked for permission to celebrate the occasion with his friends and promised not to make noise and keep the party going any later than 4 pm on Saturday. We did inform about the party to all our neighbors, but unfortunately, you and your family were not in town. My wife and I were planning to stay home and watch over the kids but we had to leave them alone as my wife had a doctor's appointment on the same day which he forgot when granting permission to my son. When we returned home after the appointment at 2 pm, we were informed about the complaint. My family and I are apologetic about the whole situation. If you had been there last week, I would have informed you about the party. Yours faithfully, Tom
Dear Tim,

I am writing in connection with your recent noise complaint. I apologize for the inconvenience it might have caused
but
we didn’t intend to trouble anyone.

Let
me
explain
the situation in a
little
more detail. My son graduated last
week and
he
asked for
permission to celebrate the occasion with his friends and promised not to
make
noise and
keep
the party going any later than 4 pm on Saturday. We did inform about the party to all our neighbors,
but
unfortunately, you and your family were not in town. My wife and I were planning to stay home and
watch
over the kids
but
we had to
leave
them alone as my wife had a doctor's appointment on the same day which he forgot when granting permission to my son. When we returned home after the appointment at 2 pm, we
were informed
about the complaint.

My family and I are apologetic about the whole situation. If you had been there last week, I would have informed you about the party.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tom
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IELTS letter Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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