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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Letter : describe about what you enjoyed about course. say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Letter: describe about what you enjoyed about course. say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer 71K6
Dear Mr Bing, I am writing this letter as a feedback on the cookery classes I attended last month from 1st March to 1 April 2021. I truly enjoyed the course and definitely want to thank you and give some honest feedback about the sessions. There were multiple dishes which were taught in the session from Appetizers to Main course, everything was new and interesting. The workshops which included preparation of Italian dishes, was the one which I personally enjoyed the most. Moreover, it included the exotic herbs and cheese in preparing sauces for the dish was breathtaking. I always wanted to eat it while cooking because it looked so scrumptious. It is all because you have always been helpful and let me do everything on my own under your guidance. This is the reason I could learn cooking so easily and rapidly. You will be glad to know that after the course completion, I cook daily for my family and everybody appreciates the food. Especially, they find the Green Thai curry with Brown rice, very healthy and delicious, and ask me to cook it every weekend. Besides this, I think you must start a course on the desserts making in the school. This will be helpful for students who have already completed the first course that is Main Dish Course or who are just interested in making desserts. I will be the first student to join this class. I trust this feedback and suggestions will be helpful. Yours sincerely, Nancy Brown.
Dear Mr Bing,

I am writing this letter as a feedback on the cookery classes I attended last month from 1st March to 1 April 2021. I
truly
enjoyed the
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course
and definitely want to thank you and give
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some
honest feedback about the sessions.

There were multiple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dishes
which
were taught
in the session from Appetizers to Main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, everything was new and interesting. The workshops which included preparation of Italian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dishes
, was the one which I
personally
enjoyed the most.
Moreover
, it included the exotic herbs and cheese in preparing sauces for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dish
was breathtaking. I always wanted to eat it while cooking
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because
it looked
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
scrumptious.

It is all
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because
you have always been helpful and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me do everything on my
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own
under your guidance. This is the reason I could learn cooking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
easily
and
rapidly
. You will be glad to know that after the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
completion, I cook daily for my family and everybody appreciates the food.
Especially
, they find the Green Thai curry with Brown rice,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
healthy and delicious, and ask me to cook it every weekend.

Besides
this, I
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think
you
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must
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start
a
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course
on the desserts making in the school. This will be helpful for students who have already completed the
first
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course
that is
Main
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Dish
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Course
or who are
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just
interested in making desserts. I will be the
first
student to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
this
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class
.

I trust this feedback and suggestions will be helpful.

Yours
sincerely
,

Nancy Brown.

IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Letter: describe about what you enjoyed about course. say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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252 words
6.0
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