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You have recently moved to a big city and have decided to write a friend from your old neighborhood. Write a letter describing life in your new city and feelings about the changes

You have recently moved to a big city and have decided to write a friend from your old neighborhood. Write a letter describing life in your new city and feelings about the changes obaob
Dear Beatris Hello! How are you? I was going to write a long time ago. But, I moved a new town. There are a lot of wonderful things in here. You don't know what to get. London is a really exciting city. There are a lot of park, shop, museum, cafe, restaurant, in town. You don't know where to go. I think it's a great city. I like living here now. But I often feel homesick as I miss my friends and my old neigbourhood. I will never forget the best time I spent there. Especially when we play snowballs with the kids every winter. That's all my news for now. Please write back soon. Say "hi" to Tom and Bake. Lots of love Isabella
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Beatris


Hello! How are you? I was going to write a long time ago.
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But
, I
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moved
a new town. There are
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a lot of
wonderful things in here. You don't know what to
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get
. London is a
really
exciting city. There are
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a lot of park
, shop, museum,
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
, restaurant, in town. You don't know where to go. I
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think
it's a great city. I like living here
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now
.
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But
I
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often
feel homesick as I miss my friends and my
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old
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neigbourhood
. I will never forget the best time I spent there.
Especially
when we play snowballs with the kids every winter. That's all my news for
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now
.
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Please
write back
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soon
. Say
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"
hi
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"
to Tom and Bake.

Lots of
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love


Isabella

IELTS letter You have recently moved to a big city and have decided to write a friend from your old neighborhood. Write a letter describing life in your new city and feelings about the changes

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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