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Write a letter to your landlord to allow you to pay the rent next month

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Dear Sir I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am unable to pay the monthly rent this month. However, I usually pay you the monthly rent on time. On the contrary, I am not be able make it, this month owing to getting my son admission in the college. As far as you that this college is known for its educational background. It is of the best institution of our area. According to the rules and regulations of this academic best institution, we had to deposit the annual fee in the beginning of the session. Sir, you know that I am an employee and I work on salary. I don't make enough money so I could have paid it in first installment. I had to take a loan from bank to pay the fee. I have to pay EMI Rs 5000/-. I have been rendered helpless to pay monthly rent to you. It's my humble request to allow me this amount next month. I hopeful that, you will be compassionate enough to understand my genuine problem. Yours sincerely.
Dear Sir I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am unable to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pay
the monthly rent this month.
However
, I
usually
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pay
you the monthly rent on time.
On the contrary
, I am not
Consider using a past participle here: "been".
be
able
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it, this month owing to getting my son admission in the college. As far as you that this college
is known
for its educational background. It is of the best institution of our area. According to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations of this academic best institution, we had to deposit the annual fee in the beginning of the session. Sir, you know that I am an employee and I work on salary. I don't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
money
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so
I could have paid it in
first
installment. I had to take a loan from bank to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pay
the fee.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pay
EMI Rs 5000/-.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
been rendered
helpless to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pay
monthly rent to you. It's my humble request to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me this amount
next
month. I hopeful that, you will be compassionate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to understand my genuine problem. Yours
sincerely
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord to allow you to pay the rent next month

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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