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You are renting an apartment and have accidentally broken something. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Describe what is broken Explain how it happened Offer to make up for the damage in someway

You are renting an apartment and have accidentally broken something. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Describe what is broken Explain how it happened Offer to make up for the damage in someway AgQYM
Dear Mr Lionel My name is Mike, your tenant in the 210 room on the second floor in Colney Building. I’m writing to offer an explanation for breaking a clock in a table in your apartment. As you know, I’ve just moved into your flat for a week in order to go to the office easily. Last Friday, after completing the deadlines of the work assigned by my superior, I came back late to my flat and went to bed immediately. Before sleeping, I used an-alarm clock, which was green and rectangular, to set the time to 7 a. m in the Saturday morning. Unfortunately, I accidentally broke it on the next day when I forgot I was resting before. With highsight, I should have put the clock in a place far from my bed, instead of putting it in the corner of the table. It was totally my fault and I feel so awful. Fortunately, I have a friend who is an owner of a clock store and I was wondering if I could spend money on buying this one for you. I hope that this letter clears up any queries you had about the situation. Obviously, I feel absolutely terrible about what happened, and offer you my apologies for all the inconvenience caused. Best regard. Michael.
Dear Mr Lionel

My name is Mike, your tenant in the 210 room on the second floor in
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Colney
Building. I’m writing to offer an explanation for breaking a
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clock
in a table in your apartment.

As you know, I’ve
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just
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moved
into your flat for a week in order to go to the office
easily
. Last Friday, after completing the deadlines of the work assigned by my superior, I came back late to my flat and went to bed immediately.
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Before
sleeping, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
an-alarm
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clock
, which was green and rectangular, to set the time to 7 a. m in the Saturday morning.

Unfortunately, I
accidentally
broke it on the
next
day when I forgot I was resting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
. With
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highsight
, I should have put the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clock
in a place far from my bed,
instead
of putting it in the corner of the table. It was
totally
my fault and I feel
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so
awful.
Fortunately
, I have a friend who is an owner of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clock
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
store and
I was wondering if I could spend money on buying this one for you.

I hope that this letter clears up any queries you had about the situation.
Obviously
, I feel
absolutely
terrible about what happened, and offer you my apologies for all the inconvenience caused.

Best
Did you mean "regards"?
regard
.

Michael.
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IELTS letter You are renting an apartment and have accidentally broken something. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Describe what is broken Explain how it happened Offer to make up for the damage in someway

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  American English
7 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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