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Your neighbor have dog and creates a problem

Your neighbor have dog and creates a problem PYQX
Dear Mr. Deshmukh, I'm John Smith, living in the same street where you live almost exact opposite to your house. The purpose of writing this letter to complaint about your dog Jack. He start to bark from late evening to whole night and it has been routine of him. It is not only disturbance for me but also many people who live in this street. As I'm working in research area, as a research scholar for me 7 to 8 hours of sleep is necessary to perform my job role effectively. However, due to the noise I'm unable to sleep and as a result I feel sleepy at my work place. Please can you offer him some food at the late evening because I feel because of thristy he barks. In addition to this, if possible try to consult the vetarnity specialists cause he barks so much. Looking for your positive co-operation. Yours truly, John Smith
Dear Mr.
Deshmukh
,

I'm John Smith, living in the same street where you
live
almost exact opposite to your
house
. The purpose of writing this letter to complaint about your dog Jack.

He
start
to bark from late evening to whole night and it has been routine of him. It is not
only
disturbance for me
but
also
many
people
who
live
in this street. As I'm working in research area, as a research scholar for me 7 to 8 hours of sleep is necessary to perform my job role
effectively
.
However
, due to the noise I'm unable to sleep and
as a result
I feel sleepy at my work place.

Please
can you offer him
some
food at the late evening
because
I feel
because
of
thristy
he barks.
In addition
to this, if possible try to consult the
vetarnity
specialists
cause he
barks
so
much.

Looking for your
positive
co-operation.

Yours
truly
,

John Smith
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IELTS letter Your neighbor have dog and creates a problem

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
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