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Dear sir, I am glad to know that you are conducting an annual festival in my town this year.i would like to tell you about last year's annual festival that was held on 21 December to 30 December in playground. There were so many vendor shops for eating and shopping and various types of rides for people to enjoy .There were so many games too for fun.The sarpanch of my town was also invited as a chief guest.Moreover, it is a traditional festival held every year in my town where some dance performances were too performed by the town people. However, every year, me and parents gave some money for funding purposes so that it can help the person who organised the event. Thus, i want to contribute this year too.However,festival has conducted when there are Christmas holidays,so that all the people of the town should be free at that time.It is very grateful to me if i am able to help you in organising the festival. Tell me more about the festival that what's in your mind to do this year

Dear sir, I am glad to know that you are conducting an annual festival in my town this year. i would like to tell you about last year's annual festival that was held on 21 December to 30 December in playground. There were so many vendor shops for eating and shopping and various types of rides for people to enjoy. There were so many games too for fun. The sarpanch of my town was also invited as a chief guest. Moreover, it is a traditional festival held every year in my town where some dance performances were too performed by the town people. However, every year, me and parents gave some money for funding purposes so that it can help the person who organised the event. Thus, i want to contribute this year too. However, festival has conducted when there are Christmas holidays, so that all the people of the town should be free at that time. It is very grateful to me if i am able to help you in organising the festival. Tell me more about the festival that what's in your mind to do this year 31lm
Dear sir, I am glad to know that you are conducting an annual festival in my town this year. i would like to tell you about last year's annual festival that was held on 21 December to 30 December in playground. There were so many vendor shops for eating and shopping and various types of rides for people to enjoy. There were so many games too for fun. The sarpanch of my town was also invited as a chief guest. Moreover, it is a traditional festival held every year in my town where some dance performances were too performed by the town people. However, every year, me and parents gave some money for funding purposes so that it can help the person who organised the event. Thus, i want to contribute this year too. However, festival has conducted when there are Christmas holidays, so that all the people of the town should be free at that time. It is very grateful to me if i am able to help you in organising the festival. Tell me more about the festival that what's in your mind to do this year so that i can also help you in that. What are you planning to do and what is the timing and date on which you have finalized the details. who is the chief guest this year. give me details about the snacks and games which you are thinking. I am very thankful to you if you gave me chance to help you in the festival. Looking forward to hear from you. yours sincerely, john
Dear sir, I am glad to know that you are conducting an annual
festival
in my
town
this
year
.
i
would like to
tell
you about last year's annual
festival
that
was held
on 21 December to 30 December in playground. There were
so
many
vendor shops for eating and shopping and various types of rides for
people
to enjoy. There were
so
many
games too for fun. The
sarpanch
of my
town
was
also
invited as a chief guest.
Moreover
, it is a traditional
festival
held every
year
in my
town
where
some
dance performances were too performed by the
town
people
.
However
, every
year
, me and parents gave
some
money for funding purposes
so
that it can
help
the person who
organised
the
event
.
Thus
,
i
want to contribute this
year
too.
However
,
festival
has conducted when there are Christmas holidays,
so
that all the
people
of the
town
should be free at that time. It is
very
grateful to me if
i
am able to
help
you in
organising
the
festival
.
Tell
me more about the
festival
that what's in your mind to do this
year
so
that
i
can
also
help
you in that. What are you planning to do and what is the timing and date on which you have finalized the
details
.
who
is the chief guest this
year
.
give
me
details
about the snacks and games which you are thinking. I am
very
thankful to you if you gave me chance to
help
you in the
festival
. Looking forward
to hear
from you.
yours
sincerely
,
john
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IELTS letter Dear sir, I am glad to know that you are conducting an annual festival in my town this year. i would like to tell you about last year's annual festival that was held on 21 December to 30 December in playground. There were so many vendor shops for eating and shopping and various types of rides for people to enjoy. There were so many games too for fun. The sarpanch of my town was also invited as a chief guest. Moreover, it is a traditional festival held every year in my town where some dance performances were too performed by the town people. However, every year, me and parents gave some money for funding purposes so that it can help the person who organised the event. Thus, i want to contribute this year too. However, festival has conducted when there are Christmas holidays, so that all the people of the town should be free at that time. It is very grateful to me if i am able to help you in organising the festival. Tell me more about the festival that what's in your mind to do this year

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