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You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company.

You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. ej0J
Dear John, Dear John, I would like to introduce myself for your, I'm Amr who started to join your company as a part-time employee during last six months. In the beginning of my work, I was really feeling so much pleasurable of our environment and my colleagues, Unfortunately after just 2 months, I started that everything become difference, Now I found that everyone of my colleagues just caring about his benefits only without being interested of how he could support his teamwork. I'm really sure that individual work in companies couldn't reach any improvement, according to that, I feel shame to announce you that I wouldn't like to stay at work anymore, Definitely I didn't take this decision fastly or without thinking enough for it, But I'm already used to think about it for 2 months. So please, I wish you accept my request for resignation without any bad feelings. Amr In the beginning of my work, I was really feeling so much pleasurable of our environment and my colleagues, Unfortunately after just 2 months, I started that everything become difference, Now I found that everyone of my colleagues just caring about his benefits only without being interested of how he could support his teamwork. I'm really sure that individual work in companies couldn't reach any improvement, according to that, I feel shame to announce you that I wouldn't like to stay at work anymore, Definitely I didn't take this decision fastly or without thinking enough for it, But I'm already used to think about it for 2 months. So please, I wish you accept my request for resignation without any bad feelings. Amr
Dear John,

Dear John, I would like to introduce myself for your, I'm
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company
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. In the beginning of my
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work
, I was
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really
feeling
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so
much pleasurable of our environment and my
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colleagues
, Unfortunately after
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just
2
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months
, I
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started
that everything become difference,
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Now
I found that
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everyone
of my
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colleagues
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just
caring about his benefits
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only
without
being interested
of how he could support his teamwork. I'm
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really
sure that individual
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work
in
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companies
couldn't reach any improvement, according to that, I feel shame to announce you that I wouldn't like to stay at
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work
anymore, Definitely I didn't take this decision
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fastly
or without thinking
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enough
for it,
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I'm already
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used
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about it for 2
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months
.
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So
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please
, I wish you accept my request for resignation without any
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bad
feelings.

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Amr


In the beginning of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, I was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
feeling
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much pleasurable of our environment and my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
colleagues
, Unfortunately after
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
months
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
that everything become difference,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I found that
Did you mean "every one"?
everyone
of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
colleagues
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
caring about his benefits
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
without
being interested
of how he could support his teamwork.

I'm
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
sure that individual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
couldn't reach any improvement, according to that, I feel shame to announce you that I wouldn't like to stay at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
anymore, Definitely I didn't take this decision
Possible spelling mistake found.
fastly
or without thinking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
for it,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I'm already
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used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about it for 2 months.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
, I wish you accept my request for resignation without any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
feelings.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Amr
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IELTS letter You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company.

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  American English
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273 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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