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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer ejqW
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my concern related to my accomodation. I currently stay with a fellow pupil and I find it hard to adjust. It has been almost a month since I have been experiencing lack of sleep due to the music played on my roommate's phone. Not only is she indifferent to my request of turning off the music but also extremely rude. In addition to this, she has started to leave the lights on in the night, in spite of knowing the fact that I cannot sleep well without the room being dark enough. Furthermore, I feel tired and low throughout the day, owing to the fact that my body is not getting enough rest. This is further affecting my scores. Besides, I am unable to finish my course work due to loud noise. If this continues, I am afraid that I will fail my exams. In reference to my unfortunate condition, I request you to place me in a place for single occupancy. This would ensure that I can have a good night's sleep, along with good score. Looking forward for your positive response. Yours faithfully, Pushya
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my concern related to my
accomodation
. I
currently
stay with a fellow pupil and I find it
hard
to adjust.

It has been almost a month since I have been experiencing lack of sleep due to the music played on my roommate's phone. Not
only
is she indifferent to my request of turning off the music
but
also
extremely
rude.
In addition
to this, she has
started
to
leave
the lights on in the night,
in spite of
knowing the fact that I cannot sleep well without the room being dark
enough
.

Furthermore
, I feel tired and low throughout the day, owing to the fact that my body is not getting
enough
rest. This is
further
affecting my scores.
Besides
, I am unable to finish my course work due to loud noise. If this continues, I am afraid that I will fail my exams.

In reference to my unfortunate condition, I request you to place me in a place for single occupancy. This would ensure that I can have a
good
night's sleep, along with
good
score.

Looking forward for your
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Pushya
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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  American English
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194 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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