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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. D0Km
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in feedback of the garbage collection system that is introduced recently as a replacement of the earlier one and wish to clarify that it is not working as expected. The new mechanism includes decomposing of the garbage bags right when they are being fed in the lorries. Inadvertently, the processing unit throws out small chunks of unprocessed garbage causing front yards and curbs dirty. The unit installed, although not freshly, has closing lid inappropriate or absent at all. Local society, including shop owners, street walkers and others, are having trouble dealing with the untidiness and dirtiness of the area and request you to either bring back the old system or fix the existing. Procrastinating this can lead to health and medical issues. Yours Sincerely, Megan Faith
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in feedback of the garbage collection system that
is introduced
recently as a replacement of the earlier one and wish to clarify that it is not working as
expected
.

The new mechanism includes decomposing of the garbage bags right when they are
being fed
in the lorries.
Inadvertently
, the processing unit throws out
small
chunks of unprocessed garbage causing front yards and curbs dirty.

The unit installed, although not
freshly
, has closing lid inappropriate or absent at all. Local society, including shop owners, street walkers
and others
, are having trouble dealing with the untidiness and dirtiness of the area and request you to either bring back the
old
system or
fix
the existing. Procrastinating this can lead to health and medical issues.

Yours
Sincerely
, Megan Faith
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IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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