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Letter for parents about the school play

Letter for parents about the school play VlLBO
Dear; Olivia Miller, Ash Samaraweera, Aaron Bailey, Stephen Johnson, William Jones, Avani Senanayake, Mia Gunasekara, Dulani Perera, Ashley Johnson, Jorden Brown, Julia Smith. Thanks for buying the school play ticket and we delighted that you all are joining. The play, Little Red Riding Hood, is the one which you wanted to watch in the theatre. The school play is held on 07/05/2021 at the school theatre. We are waiting to see you on that day.
Dear;

Olivia Miller, Ash
Samaraweera
, Aaron Bailey, Stephen Johnson, William Jones,
Avani
Senanayake
, Mia
Gunasekara
,
Dulani
Perera
, Ashley Johnson,
Jorden
Brown, Julia Smith.

Thanks for buying the school play
ticket and
we delighted that you all are joining. The play,
Little
Red Riding Hood, is the one which you wanted to
watch
in the
theatre
. The school play
is held
on 07/05/2021 at the school
theatre
. We are waiting to
see
you on that day.
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IELTS letter Letter for parents about the school play

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
75 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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