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Write a letter to the head of the department of the education to so your appreciation of the course you attended. In your letter explain about the course and how it has benefited.

Write a letter to the head of the department of the education to so your appreciation of the course you attended. In your letter explain about the course and how it has benefited. XnW0r
Dear Mr. Prem Patel, My name is Meghal Patel. I am a student of spoken English and Personality development course at your institute. I an writing this letter to appreciate the course. It turned out to be very fruitful. My native language is Gujarati, and I completed my formal education in Gujarati medium. I always delay to speak in English and had lack of confidence due to it. But this course help me much more confident. Along with English I also enjoyed the grooming session, etiquettes, and manners. My family and friends are able to notice the positive change in me and I have been receiving many compliments. Even this will be useful in my office, because I am able to handle the customers without any language barrier. My boss is also happy, as I can handle foreign clients. All the faculties are talented and cooperative. I would also suggest my colleagues at work to join your course. Thank you for your support. Yours faithfully, Meghal Patel.
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Patel, My name is
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Meghal
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course
at your institute.
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an
writing this letter to appreciate the
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course
. It turned out to be
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very
fruitful. My native language is Gujarati, and I completed my formal education in Gujarati medium. I always
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delay to speak
in English and had lack of confidence due to it.
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But
this
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course
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me much more confident. Along with English I
also
enjoyed the grooming session,
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etiquettes
, and manners. My family and friends are able to notice the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in me and I have been receiving
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
compliments. Even this will be useful in my office,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am able to handle the customers without any language barrier. My boss is
also
happy, as I can handle foreign clients. All the faculties
are talented
and cooperative. I would
also
suggest my colleagues at work to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Thank you for your support. Yours
faithfully
,
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Meghal
Patel.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the head of the department of the education to so your appreciation of the course you attended. In your letter explain about the course and how it has benefited.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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