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Write a letter to an English friend in your letter Explain why u have moved? Describe the new house? Uninvited your friend to vist your place ?

Write a letter to an English friend in your letter Explain why u have moved? Describe the new house? Uninvited your friend to vist your place? wn623
Dear friend I am pretty fine and hoping for your healthier life. This new will bring huge smile on your facing that I brought a well furnished home which is place in the center of city so we can easily go for shopping spree on every weekend. This appartment mainly consists of 3 rooms and 2 balcony respectively. I can now fulfil my gardening hobby in balcony however room are so massive and airy, feel like heaven. Recently I have occupied one room for movie theatre.  This would be not enough to share you have to come at my place this weekend so we will enjoy movie and barbecue at our balcony. Share my address so u can easily find my place have fun waiting for you. Your truly friend Abeeha waqas
Dear friend I am pretty fine and hoping for your healthier life. This new will bring huge smile on your facing that I brought a well furnished home which is place in the center of city
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so
we can
easily
go for shopping spree on every weekend. This
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appartment
mainly
consists of 3 rooms and 2
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balcony
respectively
. I can
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now
fulfil my gardening hobby in balcony
however
room are
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so
massive and airy, feel like heaven. Recently I have occupied one room for movie
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theatre
.  This would be not
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enough
to share you
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have to
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come
at my place this weekend
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so
we will enjoy movie and barbecue at our balcony. Share my address
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so
u can
easily
find my place have fun waiting for you. Your
truly
friend
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Abeeha
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waqas
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IELTS letter Write a letter to an English friend in your letter Explain why u have moved? Describe the new house? Uninvited your friend to vist your place?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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