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Request letter for scholarship

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Dear Parvina Adylova I’m a second-year university student in one of the universities in Dushanbe currently majoring in economy as well as an afghan migrant in Tajikistan. As I’m greatly interested in applying for Global UGRAD program next year, my inquiry is if possible would you please elaborate that am I eligible for applying to this programme from Tajikistan. Thank you for your consideration, I look forward to hearing from you Your sincerely
Dear
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Parvina
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Adylova


I’m a second-year university student in one of the universities in Dushanbe
currently
majoring in economy
as well
as an afghan migrant in Tajikistan.

As I’m
greatly
interested in applying for Global
Possible spelling mistake found.
UGRAD
program
next
year, my inquiry is if possible would you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
elaborate that am I eligible for applying to this
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programme
from Tajikistan.

Thank you for your consideration, I look forward to hearing from you

Your
sincerely
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IELTS letter Request letter for scholarship

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  American English
5 paragraphs
72 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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