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I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you.

I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you. bk13
Dear Peter, I hope you're doing great. I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you. On Friday, a bunch of childhood friends planned a surprise visit to my flat with a 12-year-old wine bottle. I'm sure you must be relating by now what lead to the noise that night. You guessed it right, we had a boys-only night that day. It all started with a recall of our school memories, the naughty stuff that we all did after school hours and then we all started to dance along with some jazz music. I promise you this won't be repeated and I have already ordered soundproof seal for my windows in order to make sure no noise goes out from my flat. Regards, Harsha
Dear Peter,

I hope you're doing great.

I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and
firstly
would like to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for the inconvenience caused to you.

On Friday, a bunch of childhood friends planned a surprise visit to my flat with a 12-year-
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old
wine bottle. I'm sure you
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must
be relating by
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now
what lead to the noise that night. You guessed it right, we had a boys-
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only
night that day. It all
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started
with a recall of our school memories, the naughty stuff that we all did after school
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hours and
then we all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to dance along with
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some
jazz music.

I promise you this won't
be repeated
and I have already ordered soundproof seal for my windows in order to
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make
sure no noise goes out from my flat.

Regards,

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Harsha
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IELTS letter I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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