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I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you.

I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you. bk13
Dear Peter, I hope you're doing great. I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you. On Friday, a bunch of childhood friends planned a surprise visit to my flat with a 12-year-old wine bottle. I'm sure you must be relating by now what lead to the noise that night. You guessed it right, we had a boys-only night that day. It all started with a recall of our school memories, the naughty stuff that we all did after school hours and then we all started to dance along with some jazz music. I promise you this won't be repeated and I have already ordered soundproof seal for my windows in order to make sure no noise goes out from my flat. Regards, Harsha
Dear Peter,

I hope you're doing great.

I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and
firstly
would like to
apologise
for the inconvenience caused to you.

On Friday, a bunch of childhood friends planned a surprise visit to my flat with a 12-year-
old
wine bottle. I'm sure you
must
be relating by
now
what lead to the noise that night. You guessed it right, we had a boys-
only
night that day. It all
started
with a recall of our school memories, the naughty stuff that we all did after school
hours and
then we all
started
to dance along with
some
jazz music.

I promise you this won't
be repeated
and I have already ordered soundproof seal for my windows in order to
make
sure no noise goes out from my flat.

Regards,

Harsha
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IELTS letter I have recently received your complaint about the noise from my flat and firstly would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused to you.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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