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Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home.

Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home. 5lVP
Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home. I apologize for that and thank you for showing frankness towards me. Moreover, I am very well aware for this and want to explain the reason. A few days back my sister and her two sons came to our house to stay with us before they buy their own flat. Both kids are keen interested in loud music. On the other side they bring one noisy dog with them. For the well being of my neighbours I have already sent the dog to the dogs club and the boys were sent out to their apartment. I would take care from the next time also that If they come here again they are already been warned for this high volume music and dogs are totally restricted in our home. Once again i would appericiate you for giving me one chance before complaining to the community office with love and regards, Sincerly, jassss sidhu
Dear
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sam


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Today morning
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i
have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home. I apologize for that and thank you for showing frankness towards me.
Moreover
, I am
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very
well aware for this and want to
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explain
the reason.

A few days back my sister and her two sons came to our
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house
to stay with us
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before
they
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buy
their
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own
flat. Both kids are keen interested in loud music. On the other side they bring one noisy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
with them.

For the
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well being
of my
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neighbours
I have already
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sent
the
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dog
to the
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dogs
club and the boys were
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sent
out to their apartment. I would take care from the
next
time
also
that If they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here again they are already
been warned
for this high volume music and
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dogs
are
totally
restricted in our home.

Once again
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i
would
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appericiate
you for giving me one chance
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before
complaining to the community office

with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and regards,

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Sincerly
,

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jassss
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sidhu

IELTS letter Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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