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Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home.

Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home. 5lVP
Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home. I apologize for that and thank you for showing frankness towards me. Moreover, I am very well aware for this and want to explain the reason. A few days back my sister and her two sons came to our house to stay with us before they buy their own flat. Both kids are keen interested in loud music. On the other side they bring one noisy dog with them. For the well being of my neighbours I have already sent the dog to the dogs club and the boys were sent out to their apartment. I would take care from the next time also that If they come here again they are already been warned for this high volume music and dogs are totally restricted in our home. Once again i would appericiate you for giving me one chance before complaining to the community office with love and regards, Sincerly, jassss sidhu
Dear
sam


Today morning
i
have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home. I apologize for that and thank you for showing frankness towards me.
Moreover
, I am
very
well aware for this and want to
explain
the reason.

A few days back my sister and her two sons came to our
house
to stay with us
before
they
buy
their
own
flat. Both kids are keen interested in loud music. On the other side they bring one noisy
dog
with them.

For the
well being
of my
neighbours
I have already
sent
the
dog
to the
dogs
club and the boys were
sent
out to their apartment. I would take care from the
next
time
also
that If they
come
here again they are already
been warned
for this high volume music and
dogs
are
totally
restricted in our home.

Once again
i
would
appericiate
you for giving me one chance
before
complaining to the community office

with
love
and regards,

Sincerly
,

jassss
sidhu
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IELTS letter Dear sam Today morning i have received your letter pointing towards me about tan unbearable noise from my home.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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