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You and your family are moving to another country and you are looking for a rented accommodation there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter… Introduce yourself and family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

You and your family are moving to another country and you are looking for a rented accommodation there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter… Introduce yourself and family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation 9nex

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Saurbah Tiwari, an IT professional from Pune, India. I am writing this letter to enquire for rented accommodation in the city of Sydney for my family of 5 members. My wife, too, works for an IT firm, and will continue to work for the same company in Sydney. We have a daughter who is six years old and she is looking forward to join primary school over there. Also, my parents stay with me who are retired, but fit enough. Looking at our family, a three-bedroom apartment is preferable. I expect a well-equipped kitchen as my wife is an excellent chef and likes to give a try to variety of cuisines on weekends. Additionally, at least one reserved car park is essential as my company is offering me a car. As far as transportation of other family members is concerned, we will be very happy to have nearby metro station and market since my wife can travel without hassle. Keeping my young one and parents in mind an accommodation in quiet suburban area nearby a primary school will be a great idea, because we need not worry about their safety. In the context, may I request you to search for suitable accommodation? I would appreciate an early response. Thanking you in advance. Yours sincerely, Saurabh Tiwari

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Saurbah
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Tiwari
, an IT professional from Pune, India. I am writing this letter to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 for rented accommodation in the city of Sydney for my family of 5 members.

My wife, too, works for an IT firm, and will continue to work for the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in Sydney. We have a daughter who is six years Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).old, and
old and
 she is looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 primary school over there. Also
, my parents stay with me who are retired
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 fit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
.

Looking at our family, a three-bedroom apartment is preferable. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 a well-equipped kitchen as my wife is an excellent chef and likes to give a try to variety of cuisines on weekends. Additionally
, at least one reserved car park is essential as my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is offering me a car.

As far as transportation of other family members is concerned
, we will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy to have nearby metro station and market since my wife can travel without hassle. Keeping my young one and parents in mind Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".accommodation
an accommodation
 in quiet suburban area nearby a primary school will be a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we need not worry about their safety.

In the context, may I request you to search for suitable accommodation? I would appreciate an early response. Thanking you in advance.

Yours sincerely
,

Saurabh Possible spelling mistake found.TowardThwartTiaraTinwareTishriDiwali
Tiwari