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Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person

Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person qwNP
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter requesting to consider my neighbour Mr. Ram for the comedation that your newspaper is planning. He has done a plethora of good deeds for our community. He is working as teacher in the government school in our locality and completed his 25th year of service this year. I believe, he deserves to be appreciated for the tiering effort he has taken to provide equal education for all the children in our society. He has shown equal importance to all the students and, spent almost half of his life time to improve the strandards of the school and community. He also provides extra home classes in free-of-cost for the needy. As he has been spending his own personal money to develop the infrastructure of the schools and streets, I would really appreciate if you can provide some cash reward for the excellent service he has done for the community. Hoping for a positive response. Yours Faithfully, Sandeep V
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter requesting to consider my
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neighbour
Mr. Ram for the
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comedation
that your newspaper is planning. He has done a plethora of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
deeds for our community.

He is working as teacher in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
school in our locality and completed his 25th year of service this year. I believe, he deserves to
be appreciated
for the
Possible spelling mistake found.
tiering
effort he has taken to provide equal education for all the children in our society.

He has shown equal importance to all the students and, spent almost half of his
Did you mean "lifetime"?
life time
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
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strandards
of the school and community. He
also
provides extra home classes in free-of-cost for the needy.

As he has been spending his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
personal money to develop the infrastructure of the schools and streets, I would
really
appreciate if you can provide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cash reward for the excellent service he has done for the community.

Hoping for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Sandeep V
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person

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  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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