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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear EGkM
Dear Mr Thompson, I am writing to you with regard to a computer course that was advertised on our college notice board. If allowed, I'd very much like to enrol for it despite not having any computing background. I am a fine arts student at our university and even though I have never studied computers as a subject, I have always been interested in it. For instance, I am well versed in Java and C++ language. In addition, I can also perform a bit of coding. These skills were picked up on my own by simply watching videos on the internet. The notice specified that the course is available for students who have already finished an elementary course in computing. Since I am not from this faculty, I probably do not qualify for the same. Therefore, I would like to ask you if a special consideration can be given to my circumstances and an exception can be made in my case. I assure you that I would be able to cope up with the course and am willing to put in extra hours of study if required. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Elma Harris
Dear Mr Thompson,

I am writing to you with regard to a computer
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course
that
was advertised
on our college notice board. If
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allowed
, I'd
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much like to enrol for it despite not having any computing background.

I am a fine arts student at our university and
even though
I have never studied computers as a subject, I have always
been interested
in it.
For instance
, I am well versed in Java and C++ language.
In addition
, I can
also
perform a bit of coding. These
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
were picked
up on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
by
simply
watching videos on the internet.

The notice specified that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is available for students who have already finished an elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in computing. Since I am not from this faculty, I
probably
do not qualify for the same.
Therefore
, I would like to ask you if a special consideration can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to my circumstances and an exception can
be made
in my case. I assure you that I would be able to cope up with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and
Did you mean "am I"?
am
willing to put in extra hours of study if required.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Elma Harris
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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197 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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