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Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: • suggest someone who deserves the reward • mention what they have done to help the community • say what reward you would like to give this person

Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: • suggest someone who deserves the reward • mention what they have done to help the community • say what reward you would like to give this person Vo0m
Dear Sir, This is indeed a privilege for me to write you at this auspicious occasion where your newspaper is launching a special campaign to acknowledge the deserving people of our town. Here, I would like to refer one name “Mr. Amir” for your kind consideration who, according to my assessment, is the most suitable person for this award. Mr. Amir is the founder of a NGO. The primary objective of his NGO is to feed those who can not afford their food, twice a day. Mr. Amir is a passionate individual who is sacrificing his life for this noble cause. He is doing this for the last 10 years with success and, presently, feeding more than 500 people a day. I recommend that his services are acknowledged in the most appropriate way, that is, by way of awarding a certificate of appreciation in person and if possible, certain amount must also be given to his NGO as charity or donation, so that he can carry-on the good work with more zeal and zest. Wishing you a very best of luck for taking such a remarkable initiative. Yours' truly, M. Fahad Naeem
Dear Sir,

This is
indeed
a privilege for me to write you at this auspicious occasion where your newspaper is launching a special campaign to acknowledge the deserving
people
of our town.

Here, I would like to refer one name “Mr. Amir” for your kind consideration who, according to my assessment, is the most suitable person for this award. Mr. Amir is the founder of
a
NGO. The primary objective of his NGO is to feed those who can not afford their food, twice a day. Mr. Amir is a passionate individual who is sacrificing his life for this noble cause. He is doing this for the last 10 years with success and,
presently
, feeding more than 500
people
a day.

I recommend that his services
are acknowledged
in the most appropriate way,
that is
, by way of awarding a certificate of appreciation in person and if possible, certain amount
must
also
be
given
to his NGO as charity or donation,
so
that he
can carry-on
the
good
work with more zeal and zest.

Wishing you a
very
best of luck for taking such a remarkable initiative.

Yours'
truly
,

M. Fahad
Naeem
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: • suggest someone who deserves the reward • mention what they have done to help the community • say what reward you would like to give this person

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  American English
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191 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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