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Dear Jane, It was great to hear from you, I see you had good time in Rome, the photos are wonderful.

Dear Jane, It was great to hear from you, I see you had good time in Rome, the photos are wonderful. 6Py0
Dear Jane, It was great to hear from you, I see you had good time in Rome, the photos are wonderful. I’m also happy to know that you’re going to apply for the same course I’m currently studying. It would be awesome to meet you much more often! You were asking some questions about the English culture course at The Atlanta University. The course consists of two modules. During the first two years you’ll be learning the culture of the 20th century and during the second two years you’ll know everything about the modern English culture. I think you’ll like the course and the university. The building itself is very modern, it was built 3 years ago. The tutors are absolutely great, they teach us everything we can apply in real life and they also give so much attention to every student. The application process shouldn’t have changed much. I visited the university website and filled in the form. And in two or three weeks I had a phone call from the secretary who told me that I was accepted. I hope this information is useful for you and if you have any other questions, you can text me or call at any time. Best wishes, Nadya
Dear Jane,

It was great to hear from you, I
see
you had
good
time in Rome, the photos are wonderful. I’m
also
happy to know that you’re going to apply for the same
course
I’m
currently
studying. It would be awesome to
meet
you much more
often
!

You were asking
some
questions about the English culture
course
at The Atlanta University. The
course
consists of two modules. During the
first
two years you’ll be learning the culture of the 20th century and during the second two years you’ll know everything about the modern English culture.

I
think
you’ll like the
course
and the university. The building itself is
very
modern, it
was built
3 years ago. The tutors are
absolutely
great, they teach us everything we can apply in real
life and
they
also
give
so
much attention to every student.

The
application process shouldn’t have
changed
much. I visited the university website and filled in the form. And in two or three weeks I had a phone call from the secretary who
told
me that I was
accepted
.

I hope this information is useful for you and if you have any other questions, you can text me or call at any time.

Best wishes,

Nadya
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IELTS letter Dear Jane, It was great to hear from you, I see you had good time in Rome, the photos are wonderful.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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