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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the item you lost • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the item you lost • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. BrQj
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with a laptop I lost last weekend which was under the travel insurance with your company. That was the ‘HP’ brand laptop which I bought last month with a price of USD 650. 00. It was black colored and with the latest i-7 core processor technology covering a 2 years of warranty. I have visited Goa to spend my yearly holiday along with my entire family member. The laptop was stolen from my hotel room where we were at sea beach. It is to be mentioned here that the room was locked during that time. After returning I found myself in this unpleasant situation and contacted to the hotel authority immediately and made a serious complaint. Moreover, I have made a General Diary to the nearest police station for the same reason. The copy of the GD is enclosed here. Therefore, I request you to properly investigate the matter and arrange to pay the claimed amount under insurance by a cheque at an early date so that I can purchase a new one. Your early action in this regard will be highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, John Jolly
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in connection with a laptop I lost last weekend which was under the travel insurance with your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

That was the ‘HP’ brand laptop which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
last month with a price of USD 650. 00. It was black colored and with the latest i-7 core processor technology covering a 2 years of warranty.

I have visited Goa to spend my yearly holiday along with my entire family member. The laptop
was stolen
from my hotel room where we were at sea beach. It is to
be mentioned
here that the room
was locked
during that time. After returning I found myself in this unpleasant situation and contacted to the hotel authority immediately and made a serious complaint.
Moreover
, I have made a General Diary to the nearest police station for the same reason. The copy of the GD
is enclosed
here.

Therefore
, I request you to
properly
investigate the matter and arrange to pay the claimed amount under insurance by a
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
at an early date
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
a new one. Your early action in this regard will be
highly
appreciated.

Yours
faithfully
,

John Jolly

IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the item you lost • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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