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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do bJgq
Dear Sir / Madam, My Name is Sonam Mahajan, I am the resident of India Enclave Chandigarh. I am writing this letter to inform you about the incorrect information that has been published in your newspaper on 15th April, 2020 under article named " The Shining Star of Youth". Although, the Article was well described about the Achievements and upcoming Novel of Dr. Kamal Matharoo. It was quite informative and focused about her early life and hard work also. To begin with, There was inaccurate count of her total novels those are already published. She has wrote 10 novels in total excluding the upcoming one "I too had a love story. " Moreover, Her upcoming novel name was also misspelled there. This novel is very close to her heart because of her own real life story. However, being a childhood friend of Dr. Kamal, I really appreciate the efforts those you have put it in that article. Hence, I request you to please republish the correct information in your next edition. This will surely help her in her future achievements. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours FaithfullySonam Mahajan
Dear Sir / Madam, My Name is
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Sonam
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Mahajan
, I am the resident of India Enclave Chandigarh. I am writing this letter to inform you about the incorrect information that has
been published
in your newspaper on 15th
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April, 2020
under article named
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"
The Shining Star of Youth
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"
. Although, the Article was well
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described
about the Achievements and upcoming
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Novel
of Dr. Kamal
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Matharoo
. It was quite informative and focused about her early life and
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hard
work
also
. To
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begin
with, There was inaccurate count of her total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
novels
those are already published. She has
Use past participle here: "written".
wrote
10
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novels
in total excluding the upcoming one
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
I too had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
story.
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Moreover
, Her upcoming
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novel
name was
also
misspelled there. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
novel
is
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very
close to her heart
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because
of her
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
real life story.
However
, being a childhood friend of Dr. Kamal, I
really
appreciate the efforts those you have put it in that article.
Hence
, I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
republish the correct information in your
next
edition. This will
surely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
her in her future achievements.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
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FaithfullySonam
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Mahajan
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IELTS letter You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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