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Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area.

Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. 92Np
Dear Sir I am Mohammed Ahmed a resident of Sylhet city I am working in al bazaz trad est. I am writing this letter to you request you provide some sports facilities for young people, of this area as you know there are not many sports facilities at the moment, for young people and children play Sports like cricket and football in the field of government high school but there are no facilities for sports in after office hours. Sir there is it an open ground people thow Garbage, There for some local industrial company thow waste materials, Which is massive issue for our environment nowadays, So the area under city corporation this place would be best for indoor Stadium, for games like badminton and hockey it is my humble request to use this place for the stadium overall this would be benefit for my age and children as well as most people will be more fit for physical exercise hope for a comfortable consideration of this suggestion. Your faithfullyMohammad
Dear Sir I
am Mohammed
Ahmed a resident of
Sylhet
city I am working in
al
bazaz
trad est. I am writing this letter to you request you provide
some
sports
facilities for young
people
, of this area as you know there are not
many
sports
facilities at the moment, for young
people
and children play
Sports
like cricket and football in the field of
government
high school
but
there are no facilities for
sports
in after office hours. Sir there is it an open ground
people
thow
Garbage, There for
some
local industrial
company
thow
waste materials, Which is massive issue for our environment nowadays,
So
the area under city corporation this place would be best for indoor Stadium, for games like badminton and hockey it is my humble request to
use
this place for the stadium
overall
this would be benefit for my age and children
as well
as most
people
will be more fit for physical exercise hope for a comfortable consideration of this suggestion.

Your
faithfullyMohammad
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IELTS letter Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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