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Dear Ms and Mr Johnson, I am writing to you regarding the advertisement that you placed in The Australian News paper on July 24th. You said that you needed a teacher for your 8 years-old twins whose main responsibility would be to teach them the Russian language. I believe that I suit you best as I have 10 years of experience in educational area. Moreover, I love children and I have a wide range of game technics to involve them into the process of learning a foreign language. I also play guitar professionally and it would be a pleasure for me to teach your children to play this musical instrument. For me it would be a great opportunity to apply a variety of educational methods and develop my professional skills. If you need any further information, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Nadezhda Voropai

Dear Ms and Mr Johnson, I am writing to you regarding the advertisement that you placed in The Australian News paper on July 24th. You said that you needed a teacher for your 8 years-old twins whose main responsibility would be to teach them the Russian language. I believe that I suit you best as I have 10 years of experience in educational area. Moreover, I love children and I have a wide range of game technics to involve them into the process of learning a foreign language. I also play guitar professionally and it would be a pleasure for me to teach your children to play this musical instrument. For me it would be a great opportunity to apply a variety of educational methods and develop my professional skills. If you need any further information, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Nadezhda Voropai 1Kyy
Dear Ms and Mr Johnson, I am writing to you regarding the advertisement that you placed in The Australian News paper on July 24th. You said that you needed a teacher for your 8 years-old twins whose main responsibility would be to teach them the Russian language. I believe that I suit you best as I have 10 years of experience in educational area. Moreover, I love children and I have a wide range of game technics to involve them into the process of learning a foreign language. I also play guitar professionally and it would be a pleasure for me to teach your children to play this musical instrument. For me it would be a great opportunity to apply a variety of educational methods and develop my professional skills. If you need any further information, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Nadezhda Voropai
Dear Ms and Mr Johnson,

I am writing to you regarding the advertisement that you placed in The Australian News paper on July 24th. You said that you needed a teacher for your 8 years-
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twins whose main responsibility would be to teach them the Russian language.

I believe that I suit you best as I have 10 years of experience in educational area.
Moreover
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children and I have a wide range of game
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technics
to involve them into the process of learning a foreign language.

I
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play guitar
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and it would be a pleasure for me to teach your children to play this musical instrument.

For me it would be a great opportunity to apply a variety of educational methods and develop my professional
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If you need any
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information, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to your response.

Yours
sincerely
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Nadezhda
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IELTS letter Dear Ms and Mr Johnson, I am writing to you regarding the advertisement that you placed in The Australian News paper on July 24th. You said that you needed a teacher for your 8 years-old twins whose main responsibility would be to teach them the Russian language. I believe that I suit you best as I have 10 years of experience in educational area. Moreover, I love children and I have a wide range of game technics to involve them into the process of learning a foreign language. I also play guitar professionally and it would be a pleasure for me to teach your children to play this musical instrument. For me it would be a great opportunity to apply a variety of educational methods and develop my professional skills. If you need any further information, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Nadezhda Voropai

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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