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Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: • Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about • Explain what you would like to do to help • Suggest how to gather more support for the cause

Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: • Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about • Explain what you would like to do to help • Suggest how to gather more support for the cause m16p8
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the environmental initiative advertisement published on your newspaper, The New York Times, last week 23rd of March. Hence, I would like to express my interest to join an Ocean Clean up drive within our area. I am an avid reader of your newspaper, as well as a passionate advocate of anything related to ocean environment. I was born and raised in the Bay Area, and the sea has been part of my individuality up until adulthood. As a resident of Bay Area, I was highly involved in the ocean clean up drive projects happening in our locality every year. In addition, my advocacy is to raise awareness in the ocean pollution and how to protect the marine ecosystem for the future generation. I would be able to help the project through organizing a photography exhibition that shows the adverse effect of waste materials in marine life. I am a professional photographer and diver as well. Through my skills, I can be able to gather photos that can get tremendous attention to the public to support the awareness if protecting the aquatic life. I can also suggest some major sponsors that can help us advertise our project as well as raise our monetary budget which I know is fervently needed. Throughout my career, I was able to build good relationships to museum owners and media personalities that can give support into this project. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely Yours, Mariel
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding the environmental initiative advertisement published on your newspaper, The New York Times, last week 23rd of March.
Hence
, I would like to express my interest to
join
an
Ocean
Clean up drive within our area.

I am an avid reader of your newspaper,
as well
as a passionate advocate of anything related to
ocean
environment. I
was born
and raised in the Bay Area, and the sea has been part of my individuality up until adulthood. As a resident of Bay Area, I was
highly
involved in the
ocean
clean up drive projects happening in our locality every year.
In addition
, my advocacy is to raise awareness in the
ocean
pollution and how to protect the marine ecosystem for the future generation.

I would be able to
help
the project through organizing a photography exhibition that
shows
the adverse effect of waste materials in marine life. I am a professional photographer and diver
as well
. Through my
skills
, I can be able to gather photos that can
get
tremendous attention to the public to support the awareness if protecting the aquatic life.

I can
also
suggest
some
major sponsors that can
help
us advertise our project
as well
as raise our monetary budget which I know is
fervently
needed. Throughout my career, I was able to build
good
relationships to museum owners and media personalities that can give support into this project.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Sincerely
Yours,

Mariel
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: • Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about • Explain what you would like to do to help • Suggest how to gather more support for the cause

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