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Sending extra special birthday wishes to someone who is extra special to me!

Sending extra special birthday wishes to someone who is extra special to me! lj8P1
There may be many miles between us, but that doesn’t matter. You’re always in my heart. You always mean everything to me and so much more than words alone can say. It's difficult to put into words just how much I miss you. I think about you all day, and count down the moments in my head until I can finally wrap my arms around you and hold you tight. how my heart fills up when I receive a message from you, and if only you could see the smile on my face when we talk on the video call. You are so very important to me, You are my whole world, my everything, and I hold you dearly in my heart each day until my last breath. I know today is quite less special for you coz your favorite person in not there beside you on this day, but What’s one birthday apart when we have so many other birthdays in the future to look forward to together. In last, I promise to bring so many happiness always in your life. HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY LOVE Happy birthday my handsome Happy birthday kuku I LOVE YOU ALOT
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miles between us,
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that doesn’t matter. You’re always in my heart. You always mean everything to me and
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much more than words alone can say. It's difficult to put into words
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how much I miss you. I
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about you all day, and count down the moments in my head until I can
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wrap my arms around you and hold you tight.
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my heart fills up when I receive a message from you, and if
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the smile on my face when we talk on the video call. You are
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to me, You are my whole world, my everything, and I hold you
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in my heart each day until my last breath.

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your favorite person in not there beside you on this day,
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What’s one birthday apart when we have
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other birthdays in the future to look forward to together. In last, I promise to bring
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many happiness
always in your life.

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Happy birthday my handsome

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kuku


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IELTS letter Sending extra special birthday wishes to someone who is extra special to me!

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