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Faulty Device - Digital Visiting Card Reader

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Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is in reference, to the problem being faced by me, due to improper working of the Digital Visiting Card Reader. The card reader, was bought from your company, "Thomson Digitl Services", during the last summer, April 04'2020. The device, has been sold to me, with a two year of on site warrenty from the date of the purchase. The Digital Visiting Card Reader, was working fine until mid March this year. Then initially it started taking a long time to read the visiting cards. Then in a Week's time, it started reflecting incomplete reading data of the visiting cards, followed by jamming of the visiting cards in the system. And finally 3 days back, it has stopped working completely. The Digital Visiting Card Reader, is not even initiating the intake of Visiting Cards to start the process. The model details, of the Digital Visiting Card Reader, are provided below Model Number XYZ123456 Date of Purchase 04-April-2020 Place of Purchase New Market, Alberta, Canada Please, be informed that the Dgital Visiting Card Reader, is an integrel part of my daily work. My daily remunerations, depends on the number of soft copy of the visiting cards, being provided using the said device. Hence, non working of the device is highly effecting my daily wages. Lastly, as the device, the Digital Visiting Card Reader, is still under warrenty. I would request you to please take an appropriate and prompt action for the resolution of the issue by sending your technitian at my location. I would highly appriciate to have your immediate attention followed by your silver quick execution of the solution on the matter. Regards, Sudipto Bhattacharya
Dear Sir or Madam,

This letter is in reference, to the problem
being faced
by me, due to improper
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working
of the Digital Visiting
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Card
Reader. The
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card
reader, was
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bought
from
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your


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company
,
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"
Thomson
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Digitl
Services
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"
, during the last summer, April
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04'2020
. The
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device
, has
been sold
to me, with a two year of on site
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warrenty
from the date of the
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purchase
.

The Digital Visiting
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Card
Reader, was
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working
fine until mid March this year. Then
initially
it
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started
taking a long time to read the visiting
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cards
. Then in a Week's time, it
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started
reflecting incomplete reading data of the visiting
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cards
, followed by jamming of the visiting
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cards
in the system. And
finally
3 days back, it has
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stopped
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working
completely. The Digital Visiting
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Card
Reader, is not even initiating the intake of Visiting
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Cards
to
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start
the process.

The model
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details
, of the Digital Visiting
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Card
Reader,
are provided
below

Model Number XYZ123456

Date of
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Purchase
04-April-2020

Place of
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Purchase
New Market, Alberta, Canada

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Please
,
be informed
that the
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Dgital
Visiting
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Card
Reader, is an
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integrel
part of my daily work. My daily remunerations, depends on the number of soft copy of the visiting
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cards
,
being provided
using the said
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device
.
Hence
, non
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working
of the
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device
is
highly
effecting my daily wages.

Lastly
, as the
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device
, the Digital Visiting
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Card
Reader, is
still
under
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warrenty
. I would request you to
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please
take an appropriate and prompt action for the resolution of the issue by sending your
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technitian
at my location.

I would
highly
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appriciate
to have your immediate attention followed by your silver quick execution of the solution on the matter.

Regards,

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Sudipto
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Bhattacharya
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IELTS letter Faulty Device - Digital Visiting Card Reader

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  American English
11 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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