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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, M1y6

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to recommend a person who has been helping the community form past 10 years. The name of the person is Monica. She has been helping Homeless from past 10 years by offering them food and clothing. She is a working women and has a family to feed. She works for a MNC and after completing her work hours, she helps homeless people. She has a NGO named "Help the Homeless" where she gathers left over food and old clothes from her office staff, neighbours and friends. After gathering, she carry and Rome around with her truck to help the needy homeless people. I would suggest an award of "Go getter" for her as she not only takes care of her family but also takes care of society especially the homeless community. Her contribution to the society is commendable and deserves a recognization for the job she does. I would request you to consider my recommendation and support her and let people know about her. This award will motivate her and also creates an opportunity for the society to have more such monica in the world. Yours faithfully, XYZ.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to recommend a person who has been helping the community form past 10 years. The name of the person is Monica. She has been helping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisplaceddestitutedispossessed
Homeless
 from past 10 years by offering them food and clothing.

She is a working women and has a family to feed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
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MNC
 and after completing her work hours, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
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homeless
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Help
 the HomelessUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
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left
 over food and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 clothes from her office staff, Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 and friends. After gathering, Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'she'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
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 and Rome around with her truck to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the needy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisplaceddestitutedispossessed
homeless
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

I would suggest an award of Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
Go getterUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
 for her as she not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
also
 takes care of society especially
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisplaceddestitutedispossessed
homeless
 community. Her contribution to the society is commendable and deserves a Possible spelling mistake found.recognitionrecolonizationpreconization
recognization
 for the job she does.

I would request you to consider my recommendation and support her and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 know about her. This award will motivate her and also
 creates an opportunity for the society to have more such Possible spelling mistake found.MonicaMonika
monica
 in the world.

Yours faithfully
,

XYZ. 