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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. bgxY

Dear Mr Walker, I am writing to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager, which was advertised on the Student Affairs Office notice board on 2 September 2016. I believe that my qualifications, personal character and work experience make me a perfect candidate for this job. Currently I am studying on M. B. A. program at the Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2017. I’m studying subjects that are relevant to the offered post. Moreover, I constantly perfect my management skills by taking various additional courses. During my studies I have held the post of Junior Executive at «Hansel's Corporation» and improved my leadership skills, communication competences and ability to work in a team. While leading and supervising subordinates, I gained a valuable experience for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. I am available for interview at any time. You can contact me most easily by the mobile phone number given above. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future. Yours sincerely, Paul Carter

Dear Mr Walker,

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 of Quality Assurance Manager, which was advertised
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 me a perfect candidate for this job.

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post
. Moreover
, I constantly
 perfect my management This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 by taking various additional courses.

During my studies I have held the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
 of Junior Executive at «Hansel's Corporation» and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 my leadership This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, communication competences and ability to work in a team. While leading and supervising subordinates, I gained a valuable experience for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
 of Quality Assurance Manager.

I am available for interview at any time. You can contact me most easily
 by the mobile phone number This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future.

Yours sincerely
,

Paul Carter